All Comments on 'Bad Blood'

“You think he’ll still like her after this?” Hysterical!

I prefer stories where I can latch on to one of the key characters and root for him/her. In this little gem that was not possible because there wasn't anyone close to being cheer-worthy; they were all awful people. I'd like to think the world is a better place than that.

I would almost be afraid to go to sleep around this woman.

Thanks it's nice to read a story that leaves no marks on your brain.

Thanks for the comments! This story is a little different because it was specifically written to fall in line with the song Bad Blood - almost a Literotica Noir, if you will.

I hope you can do a sequel to this, and let us know how Brad does. Plus how Steven and Misty do. Thanks for posting the story.

objectively i give it 4 1/2 stars (rounded up to 5 here).

please keep writing.

This should have been posted in Erotic Horror! That’s some scary stuff!,

I hope the poor, soon to be much poorer, idiot counts his balls every morning. This girl will have them with biscuits and gravy for breakfast. That was a scary tale.

A story where the main character gets EXACTLY what he deserves!

Great story, I love it, especially the twist! Thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing it.

Misty is so bad, so bad that she actually is the best-est of the best. Amazing story, Sir :)

Great story. Loved it. AAAAA+++++

3 stars and that is just because the plot contained a whole family of thieving, lying, sluts.

The rest of the story was well written and I liked most of it.

Then there is also the fact that neither brother was smart enough to use condoms.

They really deserve everything these kind of women are going to put them through.

@nixrox, you're missing the point, dude! It's called Bad Blood specifically BECAUSE it involves a whole family of thieving, lying, sluts! If you want to read about good women, go read Louisa May Alcott!

LOL Great.

So much fun

Great story - very well written and great progression. Would like a sequel

Loved it!

I see the sequels are about the other Chantelle women, I'm not really interested in that, but I would love to read more stories of the Steven-Misty power couple.

was Steven included in Misty and her Families extortion ring.Granted Misty willingly offered Steven half of her share of the extortion money.And lied to Steven for months,but Misty genuinely seemed to love Steven,even giving him a child.

Misty may be as ruthless and cunning as Darlene and Honor are,but what sets her apart from them is her love for Steven,and even tho Misty probably seen Steven's proposal a mile away she seemed ecstatic to Marry him,cause she loves Steven with all of her heart.As for their baby when Misty told him she was pregnant Steven froze up like a statue.

And even tho it wasn't stated but if it was a baby girl Misty was carrying that Misty would teach their Daughter to follow in her Mom's footsteps and extort money out of some future guy who was rich or well off like Misty,Darlene,and Honor did?

For the whole premise of extorting money I think it was completely justified on Misty's part for retribution towards Brad for treating Steven like shit and Misty albeit crazily wanted Brad to pay for his poor treatment towards his brother Steven,but deepdown I think Misty loves Steven dearly and wants to be his Wife and the Mother of his children,even tho she is almost as insane as Darlene and Honor.So in closing I thought the story was touching,dramatic,and a whole lot of crazy,but oh so worth a read.

I don't know why I didn't leave a comment. I thought it was a good story and scored it a 4. Also, I followed the author.

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wow crazy turn