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Click hereBelle moved forward and slipped her dildo into Susie's oozing asshole, eager to finish them both off.
"Oh fuck," Susie yelled as the dildo slipped into her well-lubricated asshole. "Give me more."
It only took Belle about a dozen strokes the get them both screaming with orgasmic pleasure.
You took more care in describing the Ranch’s Brand than you did the characters. Are any of them married? How tall are they?
I get that you enjoy writing about ass-fucking. I get that this is FANTASY. But having Jake go from being deep in one character’s ass to having his cock immediately sucked by another (without washing) is seriously stomach churning. Gross. Not sexy. Inject a TINY bit of reality here. Going straight from ass to mouth or ass to pussy without washing is beyond nasty. It’s dopey.
Having Jake’s ass reamed was an interesting surprise. But consent is nice too.
Don’t be scared to slow things down a tiny bit. Just a little more character. A tiny bit more realism and consent.