All Comments on 'Bad Date?'

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RpgmrnewsRpgmrnewsabout 4 years ago
Short but 🔥

I Loved it. A very hot story. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Interesting

You can continue with the next chapter.

live4thebjlive4thebjabout 4 years ago
A lot of room for more

I am all for a short story but how this was written a lot of room for more. A bit lazy I say and proofread. But all considering you get ***

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518about 4 years ago

Sometimes shorter stories are harder to write and this one was good. Cool parents. I wonder what happened after dinner??!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Fantastic!

Loved the ending. More stories like this...

starbanestarbaneabout 4 years ago
Short But

Please continue. This could be a very enticing storyline.

Thanks for sharing!

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsabout 4 years ago

I loved this story. It grabs you, reads well, and is sexy as hell. Love the twist at the end with the parents coming home. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Gotcha

You really got us. So very well done. Especially since it appears to be your first attempt here.

Bedroomeyes81Bedroomeyes81about 4 years ago
wow

Talk about heart attack lmao good story nice flow can't wait to see whats next

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 4 years ago

Going well until the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Oh Sara . . . .

dikupinyadikupinyaover 1 year ago
nice

please keep going. plenty of story left.

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