by Boxfan91
I am all for a short story but how this was written a lot of room for more. A bit lazy I say and proofread. But all considering you get ***
Sometimes shorter stories are harder to write and this one was good. Cool parents. I wonder what happened after dinner??!!
Please continue. This could be a very enticing storyline.
Thanks for sharing!
I loved this story. It grabs you, reads well, and is sexy as hell. Love the twist at the end with the parents coming home. 5*
You really got us. So very well done. Especially since it appears to be your first attempt here.
Talk about heart attack lmao good story nice flow can't wait to see whats next