All Comments on 'Bad Day Gone Explicit'

Just as the story heats up to the boiling point, Bam, a cliffhanger ending! Vixen's watched "Dallas" reruns way too often!

Ok, rant over. I'm eagerly awaiting the implied sequel(s).

:-)

Very nice first submission. Can't wait to read more.

You picked just the right and wrong point to stop. Right because there was no better point for a tension grabber. In the begining of sex, so you're already hooked! Wrong because I want to know what the rest of the story is!!!!!!!

Impatiently waiting!

Men! Look at those comments you're all wanting fuck, fuck, fuck. This had a 'Romance' title and that's basically what you got. I loved it and in fact lived it! How many times have you missed the alarm and then dived into your clothes without thinking, - of course not expecting that you might get the loving of your life post lunch.

But I WILL try to remember, if I wear any that is, to put on matching bra's and knickers every day. You just never know!

A very good start!

an ok story...at least lt made me cun