All Comments on 'Bad Desire'

"his sperm splashing her cervix." LOL.. as if this fits in a period western, at all. Especially if the author knew the slightest thing about female anatomy, instead of getting his 'knowledge' from other virgin writers here. One semester of human anatomy, or even 5 minutes with a textbook, would cure that bullshit.

5 Star. Wonderful story of love and desire, it wasn't mentioned in the writings, but there was a strong feeling that she wanted him all along but needed to obey her father's wishes.

I enjoyed it! Would love a follow up chapter where she lets him be rough. Great job!

Loved it. Would love a follow up

Lol love the Bruce Springsteen reference