All Comments on 'Bad Penny Ch. 02'

really. Great Dialog.... good characters. Hope this story continues for a while

I have enjoyed your story a great deal. It has all the elements I enjoy and it flows nicely without feeling forced. Well done.

Your sense of human feelings and life's realities are well expressed - and appreciated.<P>

Thanks Author & more please<P>

With Very High Regard

Finally - A real man that doesn't think with his dick.

I think I just found my favorite author. Thanks for sharing your talent with me.

Good story, thank you for the entertainment.<P>PT

well done! thanks!

I admit to having a preference for the first chapter.

Our protagonist would be a super-hero if he understood

women. Well written and efficient. Thanks.

you have been searching at the four corners of the earth has been right in... your office all this time! And what a fine bird this one is! <P>

You acually created a hybrid of loving wives (ch.1) and a romance (ch.2 ) - and that's just fine with me. Thanks for this satisfying read.

level of story. You finally put something good together, the prequel to this story was dull, aimless, and incomplete. This I think is some of your best work. A little more detail would give more depth to your characters, and I was very happy to see a principal male character depicted capable of rational thought. anon jerry

This is top drawer stuff, no question! Hope we see much more from this author.

I really enjoyed it. Thanks so much for a good read.

LIKED IT! HE FINALLY GREW A BRAIN AS BIG AS HIS PECKER! GOOD STORY and WELL WRITTEN!

This is a very well crafted story. An economy of words but said with a depth that is rarely seen in these pages.

Thanks for writing these for us

What RePhil said. DITTO!!!!!

I'm still smiling.

made me change my opinion of Loving Wives stories. LOVED The Story!!!

I have been reading your stories and I can not stop, they are fantastic.

I like very much the cheating wife husband revenge stories. However I prefer the without violance story and I like very much when the story has long time epilog.

We all need a Tammy!

This chapter was better than chapter 1.

one of love long seen and not recgognised

Excellent two part series. Out went the skank, in came the prize. We should all be so blessed as to have a Tammy come into our lives.

I absolutely loved this story.... In the words of "Tammy " patty is a Skank... She would've taken poor Dan for everything he built.....

Nothing wrong in or with this story. That may be the worst thing about this sweet tale of grace achieved. Well, except that there was, IMHO, too much repetition at the beginning of Ch.2! (Carry-over from Ch.1).

Hubby got over being dumped unceremoniously, he made good business decisions and grew a successful business (but did NOT become a billionaire!) Sweetie screwed several well-off guys out of a lot of money and then screwed off! Hubby is color-blind and recognizes and rewards good service. Sweetie can't change her spots! Only thing that could make it better would be for Hubby to tell Tammy to let Skank in, then stay just outside by his door. When Skank comes in, tell her to suck his dick - after he comes, call Tammy in and ask her to escort Tammy out and pass the word to not let Skank into the business ever again!

5*

Liked chap 1, loved chap 2!

Great read!

Chuckle :-D

Poor Patty! I enjoyed this story and I concur with your character Tammy's assessment of Patty. Patty was truly a skank and that's truly a disgrace. Perhaps Patty was suffering from some form of mental illness. The author did not provide enough information about this character to formulate any personal opinion. Tammy was the true hero of this story. Thanks for a great story.

Patty she would not just Give Up. and would try to stick her nose in Dan's buisness.

and Tammy and her would have to have it out. So i'm thinking a third chapter.

When my ex-fiancé cheated on me, my now-wife was there to pick up the pieces. My ex is blonde, but my wife is black. Thank God for black ladies. :D

5 HUGE Stars for each chapter!

what in the hell held me back. TK U MLJ LV NV

Comes in all colors

and the right outcome....Patty is just a money grabbing skank....been there done that.....never again.....

I do not do black. you wrote a good tale without getting all crazy about with

black jive .

He writes some very interesting stories and they are written in very good style.

I gave you 5*****

This author drives me loony. Either I love their stories or I hate them.

This one I happened to love. Great work!

Characters I could relate to and wanted to know. Happy ending. All the right pieces.

Okay, YOU don't do black, that is you prerogative, why do you feel the need to limit others' choices?

I wish there were different star choices... Whereas I'm not positive it's a five, I *know* it's better than a four for me...

I guess you'll just have to settle for the five...

I don't think spectacles is the answer, TK U MLJ LV NV

Black girls are super fine fucking and, besides, if you turn women upside down, they're all sisters. It's just that black girls FUCK like they enjoy it and are smart enough to please their man so well that he'll keep coming back to fuck them. Too many white girls and women act like they're making a great sacrifice and are doing a man a favor by 'letting' him use her cunt and please her. Whenever I realize that I've got one of those, I bury my 8 3/4"s to the hilt and then proceed to fuck their brains out until they're a babbling mess before having her suck me clean, getting dressed and hitting the trail. Eventually they figure out that I did THEM a favor that they're going to hunt like hell before they find someone else who's able and will take the time to match it.

He ignored Penny's entreaties and finished with real women.

Gave the love story 5 stars, with thanks.

Black guys can't get any play from white women who look good and have self esteem. Its because they are mean spirited and used to black girls who are beaten down from them and ghetto life. Its easy to get a hot black girl who has education and self esteem. Just treat her like she is white.

all she wanted was a piece of his property

NOTHER NICE LITTLE STORY, BEAUTY IS SKIN DEEP,COLOUR DOESNT COME IN TO IT, JUST 5*****.

Beauty is only skin deep.

Ugly goes all the way to the bone.

5 stars

I hoped he wasn't that dumb. He wasn't.

Introduce an interracial relationship into a Loving Wife story there isn't a sweeter way to do it. Only question I have is does Tammy have a sister? Signed: BTW

Hell, I will take all over the color wheel.

Good story

What about the dog?

I can see a 3rd part of the story that would be a fun read . LIKED THE 1ST 2 parts Keep the story going !

The only thing Dan the neanderthal man deserves is Patty... a 40 year old man that allows a slut that flayed him alive 20 years ago lead him around by the balls for even a moment deserves only and all the pain that will be inflicted on him by her again.

Sad...

Sad to see the bottom fall out from one of the better writers on here.

The story is missing a reason for being, a novelty. You have a basic script i.e. boy meets girl, Girl cheats and thieves; break-up ensues. Boy meets new girl (dead woman notwithstanding), opts for clean slate after two "dates". The only novel (if you can call forcing the mixing of religions, novel) character is the woman with the "different" hairstyle (HA, you thought I was going to mention skin tone - racist). Nothing like selling the progressive leftist hype.

Hey! what happened with the little dog?the story is left with a piece missing with no follow up on the little dog.....Only 1 star due to the...somewhere east of omaha.

perfect

Good story. Would have liked to have heard her say 'yes' though.

Good follow up, nicely written short story

I liked the story but it was a little too abrupt.

Thanks for a well-written, enjoyable tale! Nicely done!