All Comments on 'Bad to Worse??'

The story was interesting but you have to pay attention to detail. earlier in the story you said that the driver lowered the partition and climbed into the back so if that is the case then why did she have to get out of the limo and get into the back? Other than that the story was ok.

Think before you put it on paper and then read it to yourself and then go back and change things, I don'think you ever got the tire changed before you drove off.!