by 49greg
I agree with chunks. That killed my interest to read further. It was otherwise fine.
His mom started going on and on about hm Wearing her panties, then, it got worse when sexy librarian started in about being in charge. Sorry if that lables me, bossy women are just a little bit not my thing. Still good enough to read, I just hope you don't go down that road very far until his masculinity returns. I am Not into sissy boys at all.
DHL
Good story; however, no one, to include the son, recognizes that Craig is a male. I do not like the feminization of the character-Craig. I can not believe his mother supporst this action. Since Craig just lost his virginity, I can understand him going alone with some thing with the first two women who let him have sex but there are limits. Maybe Maude and Amy do not want a male man. Possibly the want effeminate sissy with a penis?