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Click hereAmy jumped back at the sight of this man dressed in black, with a hooded trench coat, and grocery bags in both arms. Without even looking at her, and looking straight at Erykah, he spoke.
"I'm here. Now what do you wish of me?"
"Excuse me? But who the fuck do think you are? How did you get past the guards? Whe—"
Zdenek bent down and put the bags down, stood up straight, and pushed the hood back, revealing the rest of his head, and his silver hair, which had clips that were keeping it from his face. Erykah stood there, staring at him. She looked at his facial structure, his features, his jaw and his chin. Without a doubt, this was the silver haired guy from last night. The guy who saved her life.
"I said I'm here. I heard you calling for me, thus I am here. Now, what do you wish of me?"
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To be continued...
Yo guys, this was Chapter 3 in the Badass series. How'd you like it? Lemme know in the comments section. Your reading this was greatly appreciated by the author.
Thanks.
Dionysosk.
Nuff said
JC
p.s. i'm a continuation writer, and some people have asked me to finish your story. Its awesome and i'm enjoying reading it. If you see this, please mail me and we can work something out
this story has a great story line and the fact that sex isn't in every chapter is a good thing i like how you are building your story line
Jeans that flair? Hair clips? for a man? Youve got to change those statements. Im just imagining him walking around with little girly butterfly clips in his hair now. You could say bootcut or loosefit jeans. Just threw me for a loop laughing a bit.
Dont' worry about the comments, just write some more ok, getting bored, need to read more, want to read more. Give me more.
I love this series. Please keep them coming. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
It feels like I'm reading a super wierd dragon ball series. Keep it up and I'll keep readin. 5 stars. Can't wait for more.
The writing still needs quite a bit of work, but that will come with time. The story, though... It's very interesting so far, and much different than anything else I have read on this site in a long while.
Keep up the good work. Your story and writing can only get better from here.
Caleb
Great story so far, but where are the vampire's....lol
Truly you have a great imagination and I appreciate reading a story that does not seem to follow the cookie cutter "worlds" so many stories are using these days.
I rarely comment on the stories I read but felt I had to with this one.
Keep up the good work!
Keep it up! Nice new world! New and exciting personalities, can't wait to see where this is headed.
It was a great story but would have been better had the 1st half of the story not been a repeat of the last chapter.