All Comments on 'Bailey's Beginning Ch. 01'

My eyes are still leaking from the beginning, but I like where this is headed. Please continue! ~ L

LOVED IT! Please write more!

fantastic first story baileys begining ch 1 . wanting more but a lot longer

loved the writing brilliant ,

The beginning was great, keep going. Cant wait to read chapter two.

I really hope you do another chapter or 3. You have plenty of material for flashback scenes if you want them, even without revisiting the rape (the rape-kit at the hospital can be awful, the police interview, etc.). They could help keep the tension up as she continues her journey toward a safer, saner relationship.

You have a nice style, so whatever way you go with Ch. 02 I am looking forward to reading it.

I am however, disappointed to see that there is no continuation. It also seemed a bit rushed when it came to the two girls confessing their feelings for one another. I hope to see more at some point, it definitely has potential to be a good series.