All Comments on 'Baise-moi, Mon Amant'

by ReefBeach

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ElectricBlueElectricBluealmost 5 years ago

Very tasty; a nicely observed little story.

colin23colin23almost 5 years ago
Incorrect French?

If I remember my school French correctly, the interrogative of je peux is puis-je, not peux-je.

ReefBeachReefBeachalmost 5 years agoAuthor
thanks

for that Electric Blue, it was meant to be just that - a bagatelle.

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayalmost 5 years ago
a very

enjoyable read, first ever wild woman cherry pop ever read

catamitecatamitealmost 5 years ago
Beautiful Initation

Fuck me, that was Hot. Straight to favorites

ThefirefliesThefirefliesalmost 5 years ago

Very nice writing. You paint a picture with words.

ReefBeachReefBeachalmost 5 years agoAuthor
thank you

Thanks for your very generous thoughts. It's good to get a story out again & this is an encouragement. I'll fix the French too. Did I say I hate irregular verbs?

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyalmost 5 years ago
Nice

Nice story. Perhaps they could try again in another chapter.

ReefBeachReefBeachalmost 5 years agoAuthor
thanks Homebody

Another chapter maybe... it kind of felt finished as is, but who knows?

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I want to write and read interesting, believable stories, although a touch of humour or the bizarre will usually help! Most importantly, I want to respect my characters. I see too much disrespect in the sex we see around, especially for women.