by ReefBeach
If I remember my school French correctly, the interrogative of je peux is puis-je, not peux-je.
for that Electric Blue, it was meant to be just that - a bagatelle.
Thanks for your very generous thoughts. It's good to get a story out again & this is an encouragement. I'll fix the French too. Did I say I hate irregular verbs?
Another chapter maybe... it kind of felt finished as is, but who knows?