All Comments on 'Bait a Hook Ch. 05'

I love these boys. They're so sweet and tentative but not scared to share their feelings with each other. It reminds me alot of exactly how it is to know you're gay in high school and have to tip toe around the issue.

Yay it was longer this time. Again dont worry about speed, the slow sweet build up is perfect for these sweeties

They're just adorable. 'I almost kissed you after the bonfire he admitted in a soft, unsure voice.' That was a perfect tease when Rob didn't end up kissing Bobby. I love the tenderness you've written. 'I've never felt this way about anyone before, I think it can be something special.'

You can tell Rob and Bobby are on the brink -- they're getting close to declaring and then sharing their love. That first revelation and love making is bound to be a very special event. Looking forward to their mutual nakedness and discovery.

Loved this chapter and I like that they could be straight up about things. You have me hooked, bad pun I know, can't wait for the next chapter

Ooh... It is awesome.

I love this story even more since it takes place in my area. Though why you're avoiding saying Hampton is weird.

if some people would not be so stupid and let people live, like they want

great build up big j

❤👉

Loving this story and the pace of the friendship mixed in with all the angst and emotions in high school ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️