All Comments on 'Bait a Hook Ch. 14'

Is all they ever do is fuck? seems like this is being dragged out unnecessarily.

You're kidding, right, Anon? They're teenage boys -- of course they fuck nonstop! That said, I would like to see more of their relationship outside the bedroom. Ever thought of fast-forwarding to when they're adults, VaRiver? Or at least when they're past the first blush of young love?

'I was engulfed in his aroma and when I felt his soft lips on mine; I was blown away, lost in the kiss.' Great scene. I wish I could have been there to witness. Two sex scenes in a chapter are not too much especially when being so organic to the situations. ('Onancock'- hysterical masturbation appropriate name for a town. But OMG, it's real!) The chapter is well rounded and beautifully composed. I love the characters and the writing. Guess that's why I get so emotional. You make everything seem so real.

Rob and Bobby make a beautiful and manly couple. They are so much in love with each other (and it IS so nice to hear that every so often). Their sexual activity seems to get hotter and hotter as it gets better and better. They are very creative about finding new and unusual spots for their love-making. Even the park ringer cut them some slack. They are sensuous (the whip cream was a great scene!) and so much into each other. I love the attention Bobby shows to Rob's hairy chest and magnificent cock. Hurrah for them and their life together. I hope for many more chapters of loving, sex, and tenderness. You have a wonderful series!

I like how the story went. The sex in the story flowed so naturally.

Rob and Bobbie had a picture taken together for a paper wonder what the aftermath from that will be?

Wow, Bobby's Dad is awesome! His family's really cool and can't help being a little envious at how accepting and supportive they are. But these two are so good together and they look so in love that they really deserve it! Amazing story and I'll keep reading on!

Excellent series so far. This is a love story with a twist.

Wish the chapters were a little longer but otherwise great reading. Thanks Again.