All Comments on 'Bait and Switch Ch. 05'

by Dark_Brother

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Lovin' the series.

Please keep 'em coming ;P

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
so fucking hawt...

incest is wincest... 3sum with sisters needs to happen soon... but he needs to fuck miss alien... or i should say, I want to read about them fucking... its going to flip my "switch"... ZING...

seriously tho, good shit!

willduprewilldupreover 12 years ago
Your best story yet.

While I loved your other stories they didn't have the interesting twists that this one seems to be developing. Definitely can't wait to see where this one leads.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Incest is best!

Please do write more incest stories. I don't understand whats wrong with that. The swap scene was hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
aahaha i knew it

that it was shannon I just had a feelin

rabbit993rabbit993about 11 years ago
Creative

Excellent pacing. Time to thank whoever is doing your editing, even if it is MS Word.

InfiniteFoldingSpaceInfiniteFoldingSpaceover 10 years ago
Why didn't he go in and try

to do it with Shanna?

C_frommnC_frommnover 7 years ago
Well

I Finally started on your story. and so far so Good. Too bad he has'nt figured out that he can have his Harem and save the World at the same time. Tell them the Truth he wants all of them and put a Switch in to make it Acceptable.

astuffedshirt_pervastuffedshirt_pervabout 5 years ago
loving it

fun stuff, but no progress on saving the world...he needs more time for screwing around...haha...before the baddies come around !

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good story, though you keep mixing up Brent & Derek.

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