All Comments on 'Bait and Switch Ch. 12'

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rabbit993rabbit993about 11 years ago
Wonderful

Perhaps the most intersting so far and still a whole world of options as to where the tory will go. How many children did Lela birth? Can't wait to find out.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Love it!!!!!!!!!!

As long as no one is searesely hert I thenk you can't go rong.All the girls seam capubel of a haerm mintality even the aleon isint angerey!So after he beats the deamens are thay all going to live happy together in a big hearm?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Nice change. Catching dad cheating and how he dealt with it with his sister making his power stronger. Can't wait to see how this ends.

DawnzoDawnzoover 12 years ago
Children????

Indicating more than one, very interesting and Summer as an amplifier...Brilliant! Love this story:)

Timtom12Timtom12over 12 years ago
I like it

I would not have imagined having Summer, or someone else either, being a booster to his abilities. Now if only he could transport himself somehow to where the scouts will land(Make a switch that controls Summer's location on the planet and Nick just holds on and 'piggybacks').

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