All Comments on 'Bait and Switch Ch. 19'

it was bound to happen eventualy im just glad it happened now and not right before the big fight

I have been following this story from the beginning, and I think it is fantastic. I love the way the plot has been moving along, and I am so glad that Nick is not being selfish in the use of his power. I am hopeful for a happy ending, for the humans and Lela's people.

I am just a bit sad knowing that you plan to end the story soon. It has such a good story line, a plot like this is not often found in erotica. Excellent job and may you continue.

I'll be very sorry to see this end, though I'm sure you'll make the ending worthy of the rest of the story.

Also, I'm sorry but the only criticism I'm good at giving is the negative (yet constructive) kind lol.

That being:

the old nurse's blowjob seemed a tad much,

and (THE IMPORTANT PART,) you've always WAY over-used commas.

Your 'author's note' is one example: "I hope those that have read this far, understand."

I hope to read more great stories from you in the near future :)

Enjoying it thoroughly and appreciate th rapid posts of each chapter. Just one little point you've used "adverse" a couple of times when I think you mean "averse". Keep up the great writing.

Thank You for this story. Great storyline, but I'm somehow sad that it ends this quickly. Fighting of the "demons" will certainly be interesting, but after that so many more storylines to follow ^^. Hope You keep up the good work.

I wondered when the nurse would be back.

I really hope you make a spin-off after this, maybe Nick has a kid with telekinetic powers?

Guess it's finally coming to a close. That exclusivity is gunna take all the fun out of it, even if a harem ending is still technically possible.

I am very fond of Shanna and look forward to the group dynamic...

Shanna is restricting him and only causes him pain she should learn to deal with it.

SHE HAS NO RIGHT TO BITCH,SHE HERSELF ALWAYS MADE IT PLAIN THAT THEY WERE NOT A COUPLE.HE MADE THE ATTEMPT SERVERAL TIMES TO GET HER TO COMIT THE RELATIONSHIP.HE HAD EVERY RIGHT TO BR PISSED OVER BEING TESTED.

Shanna's reactions are pretty much typical of a woman with a western monogamistic conditioning. Even though she had repeatedly stated that the relationship was unofficial/"really good friends", once she was in love with Nick she automatically expected him to be faithful, even though she was having sex with other women. To her credit, once she was calmed down a bit and reminded that she was the one who kept it unofficial, she accepted his past "unfaithfulness", even though she made new rules for the future.

I was thinking that Nick's unfaithfulness was a bit extreme, but I suppose it fits the young sex-starved nerd suddenly let loose in a sexual candy store.

Looking forward to seeing what happens with Nick's relationship with Gina, now that she's "off-limits" (at least when Shanna's not present). Since Gina's previously commented that Shanna's cute, there may be hope.

If the demons Nick & Summer, then they succeed in invading Earth, and thus there's no reason to put their affairs in order.

I'm 2 years too late for that! Oh well...

Man do I miss this mans writing. R I P

JM, R.I.P .?

Theres been no deaths bar the demons so it is strange to see an RIP .?

Other than that, DB can sure write a mean story

This story is also posted on another site and on that site the story was edited and reposted on the same account by a guy that says he's Dark Brother's friend and that he died from an IED. He says Dark brother wanted to improve the story by including more details and fixing past/present tenses etc.. That he has the login information and is doing it in his memory.

Great story.

I just didn't like the fight with Shanna, not sure why her being unfaithful is ok. I find it is a common theme on this site where a guy's girl friend sleeping with another woman is not considered cheating. If I had a vote I would choose Gina.