All Comments on 'Bajan Bound'

Wow. I honestly don't know what to say. This story was intense yet sexy and craven and exciting at the same time. It blew my mind, and other parts. If this is what one gets up to at the Crane it deserves its 5 star rating! Did the complimentary rum punch have anything to do with your Mistress' blood running so hot, or was that all you?

On a serious note, your writing is evolving in a good way. You definitely make me want sloppy seconds and thirsty thirds and filthy fourths! Well done, 23.