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by MarshalMarmont1815

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

This was so fucking hot!

MEGA_AJMEGA_AJabout 3 years ago
Yet Another One.....

This story is another where you had so much time to come up with a backstory of being investigated/watched, but instead you just create a tiny backstory and skip to the sex. Seriously, I feel like most porn directors or writers would look at your stuff and say it's too short unless they're from the 80's or 90's. Your stories are hot, but the lack of backstory when this one had a TON of potential seriously takes away from it for me and I'm sure a lot of others. Give us more substance besides the sex!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Great story

Make her ask to get pregnant in the next one.

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I have always loved making stories and I love fucking. I must say I get a lot of emails and comments regarding the timeline of my stories. But I must say, there really isn’t one. Once you get past Motherly Love, then there is the There Goes the Neighborhood neighborhood seri...