All Comments on 'Ballad of a Space Pirate Pt. 02'

by Mecha_Fox_QT

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Keep going, maybe more detail to fill in the story. It will give it richness. The savage land, survival, getting the fox healthy and fixed, redemption, other raiders, the developing menage, revenge etc. Can be a real winner.

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I enjoy writing and reading Science Fiction and Fantasy, I also enjoy inclusive and sex positive stories. I'll be sharing a few works for friends to read and folks to discover. Hopefully I can stay motivated and update semi consistently.