All Comments on 'Balls on Your Chin'

was a good start but would love to see more as it ended pretty quickly but I am excited so far and would love to see what he gets to wear and would love to see more detail on that and also on when he joins the cheerleaders or the sorority and all that.

Your writing is terrible kys m8

yes, please more.. love to be his college girl

Yes she can , I am dreaming too. ;-)

Thinking back to my school bully, I wonder where he is now !! Should see if I can track him down ;-)

Wish it had more build up and got to know the character more but other then that great story. Love the setting of It and a school bully forcing a guy into a sissy

I really enjoyed the good oral plot, but why the "it's gorgeous" "oh no, not again" nonsense crap? Either it's boring submissive, or hot and interesting forced, but not both at the same time.

Sad this isn't a forced plot of any kind, don't know why it's tagged as that though.

Hope to see some real forced story maybe from you in the future.

you have the best story ever If any one want to send pics to me of there balls or something Im in I wish I could suck cock. but sadly Im a boy right now maybe in the future...

Waaaay to short. There can't be tension and resolution so quickly. Tell us more about the character. Describe them physically (more than short man, small guy, etc). "He walks with his eyes down", "His pants were too tight, intentionally" can say a lot. Make big guys big, wimps small, etc.

Also, if you intend on more chapters, sequels, etc, you may want to END it or tease further writings,

Good news is that your writing is good, etc. With a good plot and MORE writing, you will generate views and ratings.

How does this effect his life at school? Does he become more popular or is he still bullied? How does his family react? And what does his bully do during these changes?

More, longer, harder

i would pay for more of this