by strong_but_sub
I can't wait to hear about what they get up to in your next chapter.
Ignore the "wimp" reviewer who attempts to subject writers and readers to his so called moral stance. Hey buddy get off the site you are not mature enough to appreciate anything here.
I really think this story would be better in the BDSM category as that seems to be the running theme right through to the end. I also think the fantasy would have been better if Jenny had sexed our hero a few times since she did torture him a lot . . .
More, More, More great story just loved. Looking for more from you.
Had I felt like reading a BDSM story I would have looked up stories there.
Dark cuckster male humiliation fetishes and invited pain mentally and physically belong elsewhere little sick one.<P>
Seeking attention here in LW just exposes you to those not into freaky weird pain and humiliation. Go where you may be appreciated - may being key.
This was a great story. It made me feel like I was right there. Had me hard from start to finish.
The authors name is all wrong...it's not possible to be "sub" and "strong." Anyone who considers themselves a "sub" is weak, probably doesn't have a lot of self respect or dignity...and what the hell, if that is your life and you're "happy" that way (think I'd rather kill myself than degrade myself like that, but I digress) be my guest but don't confuse any part of yourself with STRONG. Anyhoo, same old no-nuts story where the wife is fucking whatever she likes; strong BDSM here, which doesn't belong in this category (just think, if the author hadn't put it here the author would have to hear others bitch about how it's mislaced.) Moving the story would be nice...deleting it would be best!