All Comments on 'Bang! Bang!'

Loved the story & that the marriage continued by Anna coming to her senses. It would've been good for him to listen/ read at least some of the communications she sent. She wants to go to Las Vegas with the boss's boss but doesn't know how she feels. Stupidity in action: she's going to fuck another man for the weekend & expects her husband to wait patiently for the return? Glad this husband wasn't weak as some are in other stories.

The coffin act was genius, along with the line of "I can't share what I don't own". When you marry, each owns the other - body, heart, spirit. At least there's a joint ownership. Those that yell "you don't own me" shouldn't have gotten married, bec. they don't know what the institution's about. Lastly, I wonder: she went to HR to tell then why she's leaving, to find out he's had other complaints. Why the hell's he still working there? He's a big lawsuit on 2 legs.

Interesting, well written & thought out story. 5 stars. -- Bob

Any man would be stupid to stay with a cunt like her.

Missed some details, mainly the raac part of it... Although she didn't physically cheat, she did emotionally and that deserves at least marriage counseling and a longer wait time than just taking her upstairs.

What a great story. People can indeed get temporarily crazy. In this case Anna caught herself in time - in response to a brilliant intervention by her husband. It jarred her back to sanity. Anna clearly needs counseling to figure out why she slipped the way she did, and Brad should not let her get too comfortable too quickly. But I think this one falls short of requiring a BTB.

Nice story. Believable wife. Far too many stories have the wife never reflect at all or somehow trivialize it before they embark on their paths to doom.

It's really too bad that there are so few stories on this site where disaster is averted.

Don't get me wrong, I enjoy a good RAAC or BTB as much as the next guy, but I'd like to see more than the existing handful of stories where the marriage betrayal can be averted.

Like MasterKote wrote, marriage counseling would be a requirement for a possible reconciliation. Both need to know the reasons for her betrayal. They should also establish their goals, voice their expectations and consequently take a hard look at their compatibility. These two just jump back into the pool, hoping for the best.

The pussy faggot cuckold took the cheating slut back. 1 shitty star for one shitty story.

She cheated......the intention was there. Brad is a faggot.

She had an emotional affair and had intent. We don’t know except maybe seduction. Regardless she was darn contrite however pretty sure counseling would be needed.

The one huge redeeming factor in her favor was discussing with her husband before the deed. Being honest is a huge factor in any marriage. Unfortunately most couples don't have a discussion about what they consider cheating or where the line is between flirting and cheating.

In my opinion she cheated, emotionally, but should this condemn a marriage? These issues need to be discussed early in every serious relationship and especially before marriage. Good story.

I’m of two minds about this. Since she repented before she levy with him & didn’t go to Vegas and he really still loved her he should take her back. Otherwise he can’t ignore the emotional affair she let happen. Some penance is obviously due.

Reading other comments shows a number thought counseling Would serve as that pause before he allowed her back. I would add to that that until the counseling showed both the root of her problems they should sleep separately.

She needs to understand just how much she hurt him & find out what made her susceptible to cheating.

And what she needed to do to pay back into the marriage all the money she blew on the negligee and panty and bra sets. Perhaps having to work a part time job would give her time to think hard.

Bill S.

It was an okay story. The whole honesty schtick was idiotic and absurd. Seriously? "We've always been honest with each other". I don't think so. She's been meeting this guy for lunchs and dinners and making out with him, and now when she's about to run away with him, she claims honesty???? Horsepucky.

And just like that he forgives her (oh, my bad. It was touch and go for a couple of months))? Like he's going to ever trust her again? Why would he?

Just another cuck story.

If my wife ever told me that she met someone else and was going away with him for the weekend, I would immediately divorce her skanky ass. If you have to fight for your marriage then it isn’t worth fighting for. The husband is just a clueless idiot.

Should have sued stan and the company for emotional distress.

3 stars - HONESTY & TRUST - yeah right - the emotional cheating and planning was far enough advanced for the husband to really consider a temporary separation - 6 months min. with surveillance and a GPS bracelet. That should have been his response to her stupid behavior. It would also take years for him to ever trust her again. PLUS years of ass kissing - daily blowjobs - 4 children in 4 years ought to slowdown her cheating aspirations.

She will do it again.

CUCK

CALLMECUCKY

A creative, well-done story of how to smash a ridiculous fairy-land vision to come back to reality.

A creative, well-done story of how to smash a ridiculous fairy-land vision to come back to reality.

Interesting way the story was mapped out. Not your run of the mill "I need to fuck someone else" scenario. I enjoy this new and entertainment way to tall this tale. Thanks for sharing.

Again, still one of the best of its kind in LW.

Creative but wow the reconciliation seemed trite. I mean why the heck did she have an emotional affair with plans to fuck in Vegas for a weekend. Yeah she finally remembered her wedding vows and "couldn't share what she didn't own". But how did she/they get yo this point? Without a clear idea of why, and what she thinks is missing from their marriage or how she fells about their marriage, therr is no credible way back. Maybe the author wanted a quick story with the coffin and marriage license as the center of the story.

Not because she cheated, which he prevented. No, it’s because she’s as dumb as a bag of hammers. Having to explain to her that going to Vegas with another man would damage her marriage is like having to explain that breathing water causes drowning.

I couldn’t stand to be around such a moron for long.

Also, the thing at the end is called an Epilogue, not a Prologue.

Prologue means “before speech”. This goes at the beginning.

Epilogue means “additional speech”. This goes at the end.

It felt like the whole story was nothing more than a vehicle for the interesting use of the coffin as an illustration of the ending of a marriage. The issue that was ultimately ignored was that the three nails in the coffin were real and both the simplicity of the wife’s betrayal and the renewal of the marriage in a matter of months made the illustration trite. It annoys me that so many writers portray wives as mindless, easily manipulated victims of scheming lothsarios. It she was actually that brain dead he should have left her, because her moment of epiphany, in spite of the avowed realization of wrongdoing, seemed more a recognition of cost benefit analysis.

Very original and clever; happy ending, well written

martian slut ray interrupted. meh.

If he wants to take back a woman who had so little respect or concern for him, that's his choice. However, quickly getting her pregnant and bringing a helpless, innocent child into the situation is a despicable decision. The next time she decides she wants to fuck someone else, he will have a horrible choice to make - be a part time father, where the child will suffer, or be a cuckold.

If he really wants to be with her, he should forget about having children, and get a vasectomy.

She cheated, disrespected and humiliated her now apparent simp husband. And worse she didn't atone for her betrayal, he just pretty much said it's okay. Bottom line after a few years she'll try this again knowing he won't do anything but put in a stupid demonstration....

The first three nails are serious enough to warrant ending a marriage. This was glossed in the quick reconciliation ending. Only a strong joint agreement to go to counseling and her to therapy, along with a heartfelt, concerted change in their marriage would allow any chance of saving their marriage going forward. Seriously, imagine your kids or grandkids finding out about this "episode" decades later.

Shes a fucking cunt that cheated in every way but sex. Will they work out? I dont know but that relationship has become tainted.

A good story but also surreal. Do wives planning to cheat actually make such declarations of love buy then going to Vegas with another man not their husband for a weekend of hot sex? And tell this all to their husband? Really? She claims she can't go behind his back, but she already has with the many lunches, a dinner date (call a spade a spade), their passion te illicit kisses and planning to go to suite in Vegas for a weekend ti be sexed and romances. Huh? How coukd anyone be so delusional as to think they would stay married? How often does this occur. Her actions after he left were quite reasonable and attested to her love for her husband. But wtf, how did she get to that stage? There is zero discussion of "why" in this story besides Stan is a "really nice guy". And the part about she promised to go with Stan and can't back out no matter how much her husband pleads with her, while she has no issue breaking her wedding vows, is priceless. She sounded disassociated with reality at that point. How she reached that state, disclosed her intended adultery upfront, in order to "figure things out" is left unresolved. Then shendoes a 180. Entertaining fiction but not believable. Including the reconciliation, so quick. She needs serious therapy and marriage counseling for both of them. Without understanding why she got to this screwed up state, there is no way to trust her moving forward.

I couldn't ever trust her again. Fifteen or twenty years from now she could pull the same shit. Maybe sooner. If he insists on allowing her to stay get a post-nup.

The trust was gone the first lunch with stan...

Wimp cuckold, in real life the bitch will eventually cheat.

Entertaining story for sure. Might be my favorite of yours.

Good one , Sparky. No. Even better than that.

In the real world that marriage is over. You’d have to have zero self respect to continue with anyone like her. She is not to be trusted ever again. Absolutely right about trust being gone as soon as she started going to lunch and dinner with the guy.

Entertaining read, but that marriage ended the moment she said, “I’ve met someone.” And nothing would bring it back

It is perfectly acceptable for a husband to walk into his wife’s office and bitch slap the man trying to fuck bet. If a man has the balls

To flirt, he needs to stand by for the consequences. MC needed to beat the tar out of the man whore. Then punish the idiot wife for her mistake. Fucking her sister should even the score

A really nice fairytale.

Being really honest with each other is no guarantee of fidelity. Even the Creator in heaven omits much of everything like the tree of knowledge on pain of expulsion from paradise?

3 stars for no postnup afterwards.

It's nice that she was able to see sense in the end before going past the point of no return, but as others have commented, it's rather surreal and difficult to believe he'd get over what she did to him so quickly. And her trigger was putting their marriage certificate in a coffin and nailing it shut? Then she suddenly remembers her wedding day and vows and that she promised her body to her husband. Very odd. But hey I'll take this kind of ending over a depressing one after lots of cheating.

SHE thought that she was entitled.

HE asked her if her "really-nice-man" and her HAD done any holding-hands? Passion-kissing? Lunches? Dinners? and IF she had bought any new sexy clothes or lingerie?

YES to all it seemed, reluctantly conceded with a turned away nod. But no follow-up?

HAD she allowed his hands free-roam to massage and caress her boobs? Over or under her outerwear or bra? Had he fondled and squeezed them? Kissed her nipples? Pinched and teased them? Allowed a wandering hand on thigh? Allowed a finger to rub her clit? Enter her Quim? Probe her rim?

Had she felt the outline of his erection through his trousers? In his boxers? Given him a hand-job? A BJ even?

Many people these-days, take a leaf out of Bill Clinton's Little Book of Twisted Moralities in their definitions of what does, and does not, constitute sex! Like Politicians the World over, re-writing the Crime, to avoid the time!

She snapped out of her haze just in time. He might have reconciled too quickly.

I wonder how long until another "really nice guy" gets into her head and convinces her to go away for a weekend in Vegas. What? Surely she wouldn't fall for that again. Perhaps, but let's just say she's hitting 40, feeling old, something about hormones, skilled seducer, maybe there's even slutty co-workers filling her head with stories of their infidelities that turn her on even though she knows it's wrong... ah you've read this scenario before? OK so you see where it's going then.

I hate the "Oh yea, I almost forgot," add ins. The EPILOGUE was a bit over the top. At least she didn't end up fucking shithead.

The dramatic gesture was well written, but the reconciliation was rushed and empty. If you're going to drag us through all the pain, let us have joy and not just an epilog of happily ever after. 4* on the strength of the coffin scene.

These writers create company managers, directors, and VPs right out of the 1950s. A manager or director at Stan's level probably is under an employment contract which is reviewed and approved by the board of directors. When you get to this level, you might be cunning and duplicitous, but you are not stupid enough to act like Stan. He threatened to tell her co-workers that she was a tease, which would essentially put him out the door. Yes, in the real world, Anna would be rehired and paid out the ass in exchange for signing a release of liability.