All Comments on 'Bangkok Heifer Ch. 02'

I don't know how realistic it is, but I enjoyed the story. I need this technique done on my wife.

The story reads very well.

The two days of training and brain washing is to far over the top for me but it makes a nice mind control fantasy.

Your story line is at the very least different.

Looking forward to your next chapter.

Can't wait for ch.3

Please try to flesh out and smooth the flow.

The whole story amounts to a spoiled rotten brat meets middle class workaholic and fucks him over by fucking a washed out drunk ex soldier gets sold by soldier and is programmed to exhusbands sex slave and follows him to shithole jungle. The storyline is not very exciting but the writer/author is a genius. The elaborate character descriptions scene flow and power house formatting with perspectives from alternating two main character views. The author should commended.

This was half a story. Without more, it's worthless.

was hilarious. So a pillow girl costs how many baht? Freaking hilarious...and original.

That I need to take to Joe’s