All Comments on 'Bangladeshi Maid'

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elizabennetelizabennetalmost 14 years ago
Hooray for stories featuring submission, lactation, impregnation!

A very hot story told with care and realism. Good job and thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good job but...

The story is good, very realistic, but the the end bit with being pregnant with the man's chhild is a bit of a turn off.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
ARMPITS

Bengali women do sport tufts under their pits. You have not described those hairy sweet smelling pits

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Sorry pal, you're a heartless, selfish, classless asshole.

I assume you've based this on actual events. Even if not (though worse if so), you're not merely abusive, you're a fool. Here's to hoping you have a long, miserable, sexless marriage, before a very expensive, public divorce.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

You should have given her oral contraceptives like mala-d

to prevent unwanted pregnancy.

Nobody is stopping you from having fun

but be responsible for your actions

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great story but heartless

Be little responsible.... my view is no child should be a orphan nor be deprived of a father or mother. This cant happen due to irresponsible behavior of an educated fellow.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
A very sad story

He should have married her. That would have made the story great. Also, did not like his attitude just because his lover was a servant. After all, she was his lover.

Babli5Babli5almost 12 years ago
To all the holier-than-thou commenters...

It's ridiculous to curse the writer because the end was not to your liking.

One, the guy was not abusive to the woman at all. In fact, he was looking out for her pleasure too, most of the time which doesn't happen in Indian settings. His attitude was very nice towards someone who was his inferior in socioeconomic place. He respected her and pleasured her. Both of them knew their boundaries.

Second, he realized fully that the child was his and the woman realized it too. She didn't ask for any compensation but he offered it anyway as he mentioned in the story. If he has more responsibility, so does the woman. At least he tried to be responsible! So stop cursing him and write your own story if this one rankles you so much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
stupid

This Guy shouldve married her. She loved him she was just to shy to tell him stupid Guy he is. I would give my left leg to hv a woman of that nature

kinkymousekinkymouseabout 11 years ago
Good Story!

One of the qualities of a good story is that it compels you to read it till the end and you feel some emotions towards one or all of its characters, I was compelled to read from beginning to the end without skipping a para. Whether he marries his maid or owns responsibility is of no consequences in a story. Thanks for a well written stuff.

chachajaanichachajaaniover 9 years ago
You should be ashamed

It looks like a true story. You used her as your fuck toy, had unprotected sex with her and abondened her when she became pregnant and later had your daughter. Money alone can't fulfill the emotional needs of a woman and your child

ppr123ppr123over 7 years ago
I wish you wrote more Alex.

I love the eroticism in your stories. Your use of clothes makes your stories very erotic. Hope you will write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Armpits

You didn't describe her hairy armpits adequately.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Wow, you really have a gift for story telling.. or even recalling ;).. had me soaking wet and wishing I was in the maid's position.. it was a bitter sweet ending she took the burden of going through with the pregnancy. I will always be wondering if that was real or not.

general_amingeneral_aminabout 2 years ago

Great story, well told. Really well told and emotional. But... Yeah the ending. Maybe it's real, maybe it's real*istic* but it was sad. All the Bangladeshi women I've met have been wonderful and so damn fucking sexy, oh my God. Just thinking about them makes me hard. I know it's probably just a story and there are cultural differences but damn, a woman like that.. I would kept her

JohnnyRebBBJohnnyRebBBabout 2 years ago

Great story except for the throwaway at the end.

Nobody should just fuck off and leave their own child like a used wrapper!

Yes it’s just a story, but it shows an attitude to someone created by you

WildErotica69WildErotica69over 1 year ago

Such a hot story - the ending could have been better but other than that top class, the sex is good, the character build up is perfect.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Hmm.. sex was good but in the end turned out to be another piece of shit in a long line of turds.

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