All Comments on 'Bar Pick Up'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good premise.

But sex is too automatic. Too rushed.

No tension.

Four stars.

lc69hunterlc69hunterabout 1 year ago

good erotic love story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Loved the hot dialogue and the hot scenes between them with a great twist at the end!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Highly erotic!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

if only this exact same plot line hadn't been done a thousand times before, it might not be so predictable, or frankly, boring.

LustyScribeLustyScribeabout 1 year ago

Very sexy story! I kind of guessed the twist early on, but it still made for a good, sexy husband/wife tryst. Thanks for sharing!

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