All Comments on 'Barbados Birthday Pt. 01'

Lisa Summers you are a brilliant writer I enjoy reading all your stories many times over I hope you will write more about this young lady and does she leave her husband and find her young woman to love and be loved I will say you are my favourite writer always looking for your stories so very loving Lisa thank you. xxxxxx

I loved the story, slow build up, deep details and description. MMMMM turned me onnnn slowly ... Your a fantastic writer

Very good story,sexy n well written.You need a second chapter to this.

Sexy story, but the whole bourgeoisie propaganda in the beginning made me want to stop. Also the coded white supremacy throughout was... distracting to say the least.

"American success" without talking about the exploitation of millions of people is problematic.

Please think more about American/Capitalist imperialism more before writing more of these.

The story is well written with excellent detail and background. The "sexy massage seen" was quite erotic, while simultaneously being soft and loving. Some of your sexual scenes tend to be a bit difficult for my enjoyment, since they often are Non-Consent or some being drug related, which is not my style.

The Barbados Birthday Pt. 01 was just a "Wonderful 5*-Star Read" for me, and am anxiously awaiting Pt. 2!!!!!!

Thank you! Fantastic story...

Very well written and super hot story

so well written, i loved it, and got excited as each word took effect on my brain. well done.

Beautifully written, great story!

I'm a big fan of lesbian sex. This story is marvelous. Realistic, exquisitely written. The descriptions placed me there as a (very horny) observer.

I read the story before I read your bio or looked at the theme (i.e., lesbian) of your stories. And so I didn't expect what I read. It's super sexy and very well written. I don't read many lesbian stories but I really should. I'll read more of yours for sure.

The following is a story that a former lover of mine wrote. It's short but one of my favs.

https://www.literotica.com/s/dirty-talk-training-for-my-slut