All Comments on 'Barn and Beyond Ch. 03'

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MarcLuciFerMarcLuciFer5 months ago

Of course, we already knew who was responsible for break-in, but reading about this second violation was almost overwhelming. You conveyed the sense of sadness, loss and finality in this chapter extremely well. I'm very much looking forward to finding out where this goes from here.

Cane23Cane235 months ago

A bit shorter chapter but the story is very compelling, and I'm hooked to it. I'm rooting for relationship between Sky and Gabriel.

Rusty might have some conscience, but he is far from an angel let alone hero.

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