All Comments on 'Barn and Beyond Ch. 04'

by 4mnowhere

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BeefyhungtopguyBeefyhungtopguy5 months ago

The tenderness here is gorgeous. Thank you for these broken, beautiful men.

MarcLuciFerMarcLuciFer5 months ago

At this point in the story, it definitely looks like Gabriel and Sky have come into one another lives at the right time. Sky most probably would have died had Gabriel and Rusty not arrived on the scene to save him, but he also gives Gabriel someone to take care of after being alone for so long. I'm not sure if a lasting relationship can or even should be built on such a traumatic situation as this, but it would seem that that's what both of these men need right now. Great story!

JRSONJRSON5 months ago

This is a beautiful story. It has so many possibilities for healing, even after so much evil, violence, abuse and loneliness. I am looking forward to seeing how things unfold from here.

4mnowhere4mnowhere5 months agoAuthor

I have tried to make sense of love in all this trauma and closure

4mnowhere4mnowhere5 months agoAuthor

Starting Chapter 5 healing starts

FeelingCreative534FeelingCreative5343 months ago

This story is fantastic and well written. It's odd, I finished reading up to Chapter 3 of your story: "Sun and Sea", but this is like night and day...it's almost like this story was written by a completely different person, I have no critiques to give about this one. It's wonderful!

4mnowhere4mnowhere3 months agoAuthor

Thank you for your kind comments

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