All Comments on 'Barriers Ch. 05'

This story has been interesting so far (still with it 5 chapters in), but I think this one could use a proof-reading, because some of the characters seem to change names a couple times, like Johnny's friend Kenny/Jesse and Jason(Who gets called Justin and Jake).

Other than that, I'm enjoying it and curious about where it's going to go.

...about the names of characters switching a few times during this chapter. But other than that, I’m enjoying this story so far.

Wow. Repeated botching of names of characters - especially twice with the MAIN character of the story is just very sloppy. And the dear ails of what Mark did to Jason are still very vague - and the timing seems to jump around. Was it 3 years ago, middle school, or 7 years ago?!