All Comments on 'Baseball Annie'

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tennesseeredtennesseered7 months ago

Superb! The "cheap seats" iteration was brilliant. Original descriptions and phrases, too ("fresh-faced polka-dot from the suburbs"). The boyfriend's shirt gambit puzzled me at first. But then came the reveal about driving her husband crazy. Whoa! Five stars and then some.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

This was a terrific story with some truly creative erotic overtones.

Well done!

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