All Comments on 'Bathing Beauty'

by Tolstushki

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Sad

Everything about this story was just so depressing. The characters were all pathetic. Each of them was fatally flawed, and made me ashamed that I was a member of the same species. The truly awful part is that people like this probably actually exist in real life. Sad

OneMoreStoryPleaseOneMoreStoryPleaseover 2 years ago

The point of view from the woman works very well. In fact, I wish the story had been continued. Great insight as to the heroine's mixed feelings. Very good writing. Too short. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

great story!!! I've read it through twice and will probably come (haha) back to it again in the future. thanks for sharing it!!!

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I am a lover of BBW/Fat women, with vivid imagination and a penchant for non-consent/reluctant/humiliation stories. Would like to meet a pen pal to exchange fantasies with and to write erotic stories for.