All Comments on 'Bathing Suit Dilemma'

Loved the game and seduction.

5*s

I could easily become Jamie with the right man. Love to read more!

I totally want to be Jamie here! Can’t wait to read more from you!

Very hot story. Well written. Got me horny

Hottest story I ever read. I am so jealous of Jamie, I would love to be in his place.

lovely story line and very believable

You have become my favorite author. Always well written, uniquely original and hot!

Damn I want that cock in me

You got me!

Great story! Got me hard!!!

What an incredible story! Best I've read on here. Sexy, naughty, and totally believable. Please write more! 5 stars!

I'm not normally into gay male stories, but omg this was so hot. Loved the game and how it was going...and of course I'd love to see Kristen show up for a 3 way with them, Jamie doing her while he gets done...but I'm a gal who is into that. Hugs dear and thank you for the fun and colorful writing (cherry...compote.... I laughed with that!)

...you might consider writing smut for amazon, I think you'd make bank!...excuse me while I go take care of things, since reading on a kindle and toys don't mix well. ~K

You had me hard the entire time!

Too much "like a..."... You don't have to compare what's happening in every sentence. It's so bad.

I'm glad I was naked when reading this, my cock was HARD & by the end leaking! Agree, I want Eric's cock in me & wish I was Jamie.

Your other stories didn't have that and were great. In this they just kept making me want to laugh for how ridcioulsly out of place they felt. As it made it seem more like a parody of erotica than anything else.

so erotic and funny keep writing you have a knack for this 5 stars you kept my ck's bulging

It was really fucking hot, like holy hell

I absolutely loved it!

I feel like your wit is underappreciated

"Brain-destroying jumbo thrusts". Come on. You should write for Marvel Comics.

Have to be my Favorite author on this site! There is not even a close 2nd place. I've read every one of you're stories multiple times. I'm so looking forward to what surprise you are writing next. So, thank you!!

What a great story! Had me wishing I was right there. Damn, did it make me hard...thanks.

Oh my God, so hot. I swear to god, every single one of your stories are like directly from my biggest fantasies. Please keep em coming!

Hope my first time is this hot.

That was amazing..... I stroked my cock the whole time I read it.... now I'm gonna read it again and cum ;)

Fuck my ass is twitching as it wants a cock pushed up in it. As i read i strocked my cock and sprayed my cum over my chest. Carefully i wiped my cum up with my fingers and sucked some off leaving a bit to rub into my ass . Wow what a story.

fith paragraph from the bottom, you used the wrong their/there/they're... ruined the entire thing for me.

Jk lel, very sexy story.... hope this happens to me

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One of the best stories i have ever read here. Well written. Great story flow. Completely sexy from the build up to the climaxes.

There is cum all over my chest

Yes! I love the realistic style. Hard to find these types on lit, ever harder with a bisexual bent.

Hysterical and fucking erotic at the same time. But . . . couldn't you have worked in a reference to Higgs Boson at some point? : )

Your stories are incredible and leave us all wanting more. When can we expect another story to hit Lit?

I need a hot tub. Awesome !!

I would love to see a sequel with the boys and girls in a super hot orgy together

I want a dick in my ass right now but I'm single urgh

So hot! I'd take a mouth full of cum from both of these guys on video to send to those women. Then I'd spend the rest of the night kissing and making passionate love to those studs.

We definitely need a sequel, with the girls joing the boys in the spa

Now that was a lot of fun. You definitely have a way of drawing a picture with your writing, laying out the scene. Giving enough vivid detail to let the reader create a picture in his mind. Nicely done.

One of the hottest stories I have ever read. The boys didn't film their session and send a video back to the girls. Can't wait for the continuation of this story. Kudos to the writer. I am looking forward to reading more of your material.

"The explosion of splooge filled Jamie up so fully that he felt like Eric's cock was a bottle of diet coke coming in contact with his Anal Mentos."

LOL! Love it!

Wow!! I love the way you write! Totally arousing

Love your writing...I also try to make the readers feel, hear, smell the action!

You do great work...

Very hot and sexy. My kind of story.

I loved the dirty talk toward the end.

Love the story. Very good. Please continue to write.

Your use of language and metaphor engages my mind. Fucks it too!

Is this ever hot! Eric sounds like a total hunk and I'm sure Jamie will fully accept his new role as anal slut for his best friend. I can only imagine what they got up to once they went to bed.

I love your stories and this one is awesome! I want to hear what happened for the rest of the night...

Totally naked, ass stretch wide, cock coming up inside for me Next question?

OMG! One of the hottest stories I have ever read and had me hard & dripping all the way through. A master with words and incredible sexual descriptions! Wow wow wow! Keep writing!!

Wow!!! Great writing here and quite descriptive..

I would love to have someone be with me in the hot tub scenario and be open for exploring each for first time.

You had me hard entire reading and was wet at my tip...very leaking precum.

Enjoyed immensely and did cum afterwards.

I keep coming back to this one because of how good it is.

It's not just hot, it's well-written! The imagery! The detail! The dick!!!

A+++

This made me wish I was Jamie. would love a friend like Eric.

That was one of the hottest stories I've ever read. I wish I could be Jamie with a big dicked friend Eric taking my ass and making it his.

I have to admit, I just keep cumming back to your stories. Love the detail. The pictures you paint with your words. Would so love to be Jamie.

This is honestly one of my favorite stories and I love re reading this. It's my 8th time coming back just this year

Love the topic and even though I don't usually read stories with xhara

This story is very hot! I came without touching myself when Eric kissed Jamie after filling his ass. The exact same thing happened to me when my first top filled my ass and very passionately kissed me. Follow this up please, because Debbie and Kirsten need to come over and play!

i enjoy trading places...but after re-reading this all i want to do is be an anal slut...

I want to be Jamie....over and over

Damn you are a good writer. The bathing suit dilemma made me cum up to my chin. Keep up the good work bro!

They should have made a video so the girls could see them fucking!

💚. 👍👍! :)

PS.- The story has so far got 570 faves out of 292,115 views which is 1.95 faves per 1K views, an A-plus [=better than excellent] faves-to-views ratio!

Oh yes bb fuck me all night..no more girly porn

Hi Slutty

I've said it before, but say it again, you can write so well.

It really makes my knees tremble.

Lex Rotterdam. The Nederlands

This was such a hot story. I want to cum so badly right now

HOT! Capital H! Capital O! Capital T! H!O!T! HOT, HOT, HOT!!!

Eric was born a true dom top and Jamie a true sub bottom. Each meant for the other in best destined ways. In my mind, Eric and Jamie will go on plowing chicks, but soon their need for each other in the most base, carnal ways will orient them both into GAY sex forever. Eric and his huge guided missle always running the show, so to say, and bubble-butt bottom bitch Jamie always subjugating himself to his best friend, lover, dom & owner.

Neither wouldn't have it any other way!

Except Eric does eventually suck his bitch off, eat his boi-juice, and really gets into muff-diving Jamie's slutty, always tight man-cunt.

And life is grand for them both!

These young men were sooooo fucking sexy.

They both went from a solid bromance, best friend thing to a romance. Least ways a romance Eric's giant dick had with Jamie's steamy mouth and steamy butt. They might have been straight shooters and pussy hounds before, but now the big old Bi bug has bitten them both. Maybe even the *gasp* gay bug. Because I'm soooooooo not an expert on Bi folk, but a dude fucks another/takes dick and kisses? That seems gay to me. The one thing I wanted (and yeah, I knew that Jamie was gonna get plowed, lol, because he wore the jock) was for the two men to fuck in that hot tube. Eric still wearing his sexy boardshorts with his weiner out. Jamie in his jock, cock till pouched. With Eric ramming his meat pipe up his best friends ass as Jamie sat on that dick.

It'd be nice for more of these two. Bring in more hot tub stuff. Bring in Speedos. Bring in skintight pants. Etc.

Good Job guys have fun ☺️😉 wish I could join hehe

Believable and fucking hot. Thanks

It was one of the best that I have ever read. Great, believable action and outstanding writing. Please keep writing.

What ever happened with the tit for tat girls? Did the boys send the girls this ultimate vid?

Another chapter pleaseeeee!

Loved this. Great writing very erotic hot and made me cum, my dog watched me and started barking like crazy lol I cum so hard! Thanks for the good read keep up the great work. Not sure if it’s based on truth or fiction but loved it! I love gay writing and gay porn men love each other so beautifully and the noises that men elicit really truly turn me on ALOT! Thanks for writing what you do. :) :) :)

Really HOT!

Super hot

This story got me hard and wanting to orgasm.....I’m sure the girls would’ve cum if a video was made of this....Excellent writing and yes, it is believable as it almost happened to me almost 50 years ago!!...Maybe if it would have, I would have been more passionate........Hmmmm....something to ponder!

Amazing how the girls managed to record a ten-minute video in five minutes ;)

Now that's a friend. I wish some of my friend's would us me like that

I had a friend like that we sucked and fucked for a few years before he moved away, We still talk about it when we get together

Very well written!

👍👍!

Hot story, for myself love being watched especially directed by wife/gf

OMG!!! I use to really loved getting fucked, but I never had a lover that did me that good. I use to be a total cock whore in my 20’s going to the bath houses and picking up older guys to fuck me. Awesome memories! 😍

Loved this. Extremely hot fun.

@ShortyMac: This is one of my favorite stories on this site. I wish I was Eric because I loved getting sucked frequently, although I've never been deepthroated before. If you know any clean and discreet volunteers, let me know__ BlackSack

master storyteller

very hot

Another amazing story!

Love the conversion or both guys!

Thanks!

fucking hot story dude. would have loved to be jamie.

Hey Anonymous, is that true? If you read my comment below yours, you will see which side I stand on. Care to volunteer? What is your name, by the way? >>>Blacksack

Very well written and extremely dam HOT. I came all over myself just reading this.... and of course, playing with myself. How could you not do that while reading this story?

Love this story, super hot. Even though you kinda know where things are headed (it’s got some give away tags, haha), you do a great job of building the tension and throwing in the dirty talk.

I can just imagine Kristen being like "ummm, guys?" when the boys stop sending her stuff

fucking hot

I REALLY NEED THE NEXT PART PLEASE!!

😭😭

Yes, yes, yes!!! Great story, the build up very enjoyable and very believable.

Great use of the women to move along their journey.

But …… why did you compare the guys ass to that of a woman? The beauty of being men is that their bodies are strong and manly. The discovery these guys were making was about the joys of another man’s body. His muscular strong compact ass, not some chick’s fat round squishy butt.

As I was reading the story I came to the moment when "a tall half-empty bottle of Tito's sitting on the nightstand" was mentioned.

I brought a bottle of Tito's and flowers to a hirld; we hit it off from the get go. We had sex; I hoped I would sleep there but she told me she had to be at work by 8:30 and must have enough sleep. "I am not kicking you out, and would like to see you again."

BATHING SUIT DILEMMA

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💥💥💥💥💥 (5.0 = 100%)!!!

This is an EXCELLENT story: ★★★★★ (5.0)!

I thought I would identify with Eric,

but I identified with Jamie. Life is full

Qof surprises.

5.0 = 💯% (🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟), ❤!