All Comments on 'Battle-Hardened, War Weary Ch. 03'

Absolutely Love This Story! Great Job! I like the plot and the characters.

I don't want him to leave his wife for Kali, if she wasn't good enough for him to ask her out (not even once) then, he doesn't deserve her now. He should stay with Mary-Ann and live 'happily ever after'. Kali needs someone to love her, not someone to fuck her when it's convenient for him and certainly not her friend's husband. I don't care how much he 'loves' her.

Carlos and Ryan should get what's coming to them both and I don't see Ryan being force to marry as a punishment fit enough for him if she is going to give him back the tape anyway.

Kail needs love and I'm going on Team Patrick this early in the game even though we know nothing about him yet. I prefer him over Ryan and Daniel.

I have just submitted a revised chapter for number 4.

The blurb in the chapter is "Comeuppance and coming bare..." I didn't have the space to leave it in the description box.

I think I'm too wrapped up in this story lol keep them chapters coming ;)

Not only is this very interesting, it's very different. I don't think I read a story like this one on here and (as the lead woman being black). I read lots of them. I'm really thankful and happy to see you update so quickly and not having you readers wait months or years for an update. Thanks and update soon.

I'm sad that she is sleeping with her friend's (one of her ONLY friends) husband. I thought that she was being forced to, but its clear that she liked it. I know that she is trying to grab happiness where ever she can, but she is putting herself in a class with Ryan...where her own pleasure is more important than anything else. How could she go into that woman's house, not only knowing what she has done but also fuck her husband moments after finding out that they were expecting? Karma has a way of coming back to bite you, although that karma shouldn't have to include a fist to her face.

Suzette is no better. She claims that she knows that a woman was raped, but instead of doing the right thing (reporting it to the authorities), she uses it for her own personal gain. That may be a fitting punishment after all. As a therapist, I really wish that he would come clean and get the mental help that he needs. This is a textbook example of how abusers are created. He needs to admit to what he has done, beg Kali's forgiveness and get the therapy he needs. I would say that a couple more ass whuppins might help too, but violence is never the answer.

The updated chapter 4 is now featured on Literotica!

Not confused by your story. Confused by my commitment to it. I usually go for the quick, single chapter, 3-4 page quickies. I got very attached to this story and keep coming back. Flawed Kali has won my support in spite of enjoying Ryan and Daniel when they are actually doing her. Great story line. I look forward to starting the next chapter in a few minutes.

You have filled out the characters is this chapter, and introduced a lot of violence and body damage. Having Ryan in the predicament he deserves is rewarding. There are more issues to be resolved in this story and you have handled some of them very well. Looking forward to the rest of the story. Waiting to see how Daniel and his problems get handled.

I like this story, but there is a big problem with the transition: from the "present" sequence to the flashback sequences. It is disturbing.

I also really could do with less abuse and I would also like ti have a more assertive Kali. She is either being abused or "saved"/helped by men. There need to be some self-help stuff, some growth from her. An dplease, don't let her be "saved" by Daniel or their suppsed love for each other. It would be just awful. She needs to stand for herself !! It is also a shame that she refuses help from her fien Katrina and now Jack arrives and saves the day with his bullshit confession about Daniel. I really hope Kali doesn't end up with Daniel. That guy is such a coward !! He fucked her for 6 months without paying attention, just taking his own pleasure, and now he is supposed to have been in love with her since teenage years? Really? How come henever tried to ask her out or anything? I feel more for Ryan, because at least I can understand where his behaviour comes from, and he is quite a tragic character, especially whith his history with Kali when they were kid and he was abused. I do'nt think he is the big bad guy here. I don't want Kali with him either, but I can more easily "sympathise" with him than with Daniel, the supposed two-goody-two-shoes

Also the Uncle Jack connection, and the Cossette connection are a bit far fetched. To have Jack being Daniel's uncle and aslo being Kali 'godfather' is really too much at the same time. Like we HAVE to like Daniel now, by association. Also about Cossette, it was previously mentionned that Daniel was engaged, not married, and that Kali used to see his girlfriend on TV. Now it seems that she discoveres that he is married to her longtime friend?

I completely agree with you.

Fuck I need a therapy session after this chapter.

I feel for Kali and Ryan the most because of how their trauma has really fucked them up. I think Kali needs to be away from Ryan and Daniel so she can truly heal.