All Comments on 'Battle of the Babes Pt. 02'

please continue!

You changed tenses a couple of times during the story- I found it a little off-putting.

Sorry about that. I'm not so sharp at proof-reading my own work.

The wetness that John saw between his wife's legs after her nipples were tweaked by Apple is a portent of juicy things to come!..good segue into the third chapter..will they become lovers themselves?( Apple and Victoria)??