All Comments on 'Battle Scars Ch. 03'

His flashback was so well written, the almost out-of-body experience of each second unfolding, and the stark emotions and pain, shock, disbelief, horror. Brutal yes, but war, violent death, or being maimed for life is nothing but brutal and ugly and dehumanizing.<br><br>

That lovemaking scene was just incredible. So tender, sweet, sexy. I loved him submitting to his Mistress and letting her just explore his body bit by bit. Seriously, that was one of the most intimate and erotic scenes I've read in awhile. Wish I could rate this higher than a 5.

This story, this writer, gives me so much more than I expected! From my perspective as a recovering female Gulf war vet, I feel this person is writing what i feel in my soul, and dare not speak to anyone. My nightmares are less vivid than this characters, and I don't know if that's good or bad. I've been a double above knee amputee for about six months, and i feel like I am exploring the world like the blind woman in the story. Remember people, that there are female vets, too! Thank you Owengreybeard! More, please!

Thank You for showing this side of life. It's nice to see that two wounded heros can still have a decent life. A truly great romantic story.

This is the healing power of love.

Boyd

The only sad thing is we seem to be destined to never hear any more of this great story, a really great shame.

finished. This entire story could have been done in one sitting without chapters. Maybe lit gives prizes for the most chapters, anyway, dragging something out isnt the answer. And in this case it never will be.

written like some one who has been there

Can't wait for the next chapter. Being a Vietnam vet, I love reading anything about our men in uniform. I'm glad that our boys comming back from the middle east are treated better than I was.

sometimes life is better

cannot wait for you to finish this and the other stories, excellent story lines.

David is kind of oddly shaped, he's 6'7" and only wears a size 11 shoe; I'm 5'10" and I wear a size 12 shoe