All Comments on 'Battle Scars Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Man, have I been waiting for this one!

It's been a long time since the last installment, and i am so happy to see this one. This story means a lot to me, and I am thrilled to see the continuing story of our man from Oregon and his lover. I can smell the sex and the Oregon trees from here, please keep this going! Great sex!

catman71catman71over 12 years ago
fetish?

all i see is a love story, one that is going to get rather interesting i think, hope to seem more soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Lovely story

Great to see another chapter of this very interesting & well written story.

fireguy365fireguy365over 12 years ago
Waiting for more!!

After reading chapter 4 I had to go back, find and read chapters 1-3; glad I did. Love the story and how you write. Will Piglet be willing to share Pooh with Annie, just to let Annie know she's still a woman of course? Please continue... and thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

""My favorite toy, David, is your amazing. Big. Fat. Fucking. COCK!"" give me a break. Babes you need to work on your dialogue. Seriously, get out there and actually talk to some people, or sex them. See what people actually say to each other.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
great character development

couldn't stop reading this

old_riderold_riderover 4 years ago
Just Being Picky

David (Pooh) is referred to as a Marine. Gabby is called Soldier (Army) twice. It is unlikely,tho not impossible that they served together in the same Company. It has been said that all who serve or have served are brothers/sisters, we just don't like to be called by our brothers/sisters name. And I didn't know that rank was imprinted on dog tags.(The incident at the entry doors to the VA Hospital with the Navy Master Chief) Otherwise I'm enjoying series..

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