All Comments on 'Baxter Family Roadtrip Ch. 01'

by Pudicus

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

not bad. good concept, a few typos. I'd like to see the mama swat that game console away until he satisfies her

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Lots of potential thank you for this I will be awaiting many more

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What's an Alpha

PudicusPudicusover 2 years agoAuthor

The Alpha concept got edited out for later on in the story, but Literotica won't update this chapter for some reason.

JustplainjeffJustplainjeffover 2 years ago

What did Dad say, "What a load of shit" Truer words were never spoken.

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