All Comments on 'BC Ch. 01: Joining the Club'

Your writing style, light and witty, your sense of timing, impeccable, your descriptions of the sex, just right. Wonderful. Five stars, more please...

Well done. You've got a good feel for what you are doing. The

We'll done, great read.

Loved this line... "yelping like a whole goddamn pack of dingoes."

I'd definitely read another chapter

Who gives a flip about unifying plot? This was one of the best stories I have read and enjoyed in years.

Liked it. You have definitely whet my appetite for more.

I love the way you think & the way you write. More, please! Definitely want semi-vanilla mixed with the kinky just to keep it from becoming too predictable or being forced into constantly escalating perversions. Not that I don't enjoy perverts, too. :-)

Don't enjoy reading about humiliation at all, however, just makes me wince unpleasantly. IMHO. Thanks!

This was just the perfect, light read I needed tonight. Thanks for that! Keep up the good writing!

The entire story was fun to read. I especially liked your first two paragraphs - before I really even knew what this story was about. You have such a way with words and creating visual images. Plus the sex was fun. She was fun. I am going to enjoy reading your work!

This is the first story of yours I’ve read. Damn you’re a good writer! I loved everything about it. Absolutely love your sense of humor and quick wit. The sex is perfect too. Thank you!

...why would anyone want to fuck a billionaire? Yeah, yeah, I know, it's fantasy, but if you don't actually get your hands on the billions, what does it matter? I guess I just read in the NYT this week about who the actual billionaires are, and I can't imagine wanting to fuck any of them.

I laughed hard and still thought the sex was hot. Great job.

Enjoyed the story/fantasy. The idea is fantasy but the sex and connection seemed possible if not realistic.