All Comments on 'BC Ch. 01: Joining the Club'

Enjoyed the story/fantasy. The idea is fantasy but the sex and connection seemed possible if not realistic.

I laughed hard and still thought the sex was hot. Great job.

...why would anyone want to fuck a billionaire? Yeah, yeah, I know, it's fantasy, but if you don't actually get your hands on the billions, what does it matter? I guess I just read in the NYT this week about who the actual billionaires are, and I can't imagine wanting to fuck any of them.

This is the first story of yours I’ve read. Damn you’re a good writer! I loved everything about it. Absolutely love your sense of humor and quick wit. The sex is perfect too. Thank you!

The entire story was fun to read. I especially liked your first two paragraphs - before I really even knew what this story was about. You have such a way with words and creating visual images. Plus the sex was fun. She was fun. I am going to enjoy reading your work!

This was just the perfect, light read I needed tonight. Thanks for that! Keep up the good writing!

I love the way you think & the way you write. More, please! Definitely want semi-vanilla mixed with the kinky just to keep it from becoming too predictable or being forced into constantly escalating perversions. Not that I don't enjoy perverts, too. :-)

Don't enjoy reading about humiliation at all, however, just makes me wince unpleasantly. IMHO. Thanks!

Liked it. You have definitely whet my appetite for more.

Who gives a flip about unifying plot? This was one of the best stories I have read and enjoyed in years.

We'll done, great read.

Loved this line... "yelping like a whole goddamn pack of dingoes."

I'd definitely read another chapter

Well done. You've got a good feel for what you are doing. The

Your writing style, light and witty, your sense of timing, impeccable, your descriptions of the sex, just right. Wonderful. Five stars, more please...