All Comments on 'BDSM as a Practice (akin to Yoga)'

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ContinentalPsyOpContinentalPsyOpabout 2 years ago

This is a great beginning and I hope you continue. This feels like the ten-thousand foot view. Could grow nicely with more specific examples down at street-level, and more space for the thirty-thousand foot view, encompassing the large themes you touch upon. Big, bold section-headings might make it easy for the reader to navigate, and provide the structure that would make it easier for the author, too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very interesting viewpoint. Thank you for sharing that!

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