All Comments on 'Be Careful What You Wish For'

Dumb, dumb, dumb.

So the guy who his wife is cheating with comes to him spinning a story and claiming they never fucked? Wayne Droops buys it and Aida and Ace are free and clear, nice.

Of course the obfuscation/smoke screen of the whole "Possession thing" works to befuddle and confuse poor old Droopy Cock or as he's now known Wayne Cuckold!

and the guessing is done, what is your choice TK U MLJ LV NV

Really a decent story until all the supernatural halloween ghost story crap. Lost me big time when that stuff started. And the last paragraph must have been just plain stupid for stupid's sake. I mean, Ai Dwapps, Gum Dwapps, and all the rest?

Puh-leeese!!! 3Stars, and I think that's generous.

Hi there peoples! Me again I have a name for his family! Either Pussina or Prudence (some parts of England Puss is short for Prudence) so giving the name Puss Dwapps or Richard he will be Dick Dwapps. Peoples Lighten up have fun I AM THE AUTHOR IS AFTER ALL THIS IS FICTION LITEROTICA EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED. LOVE YOU ALL! BYE! OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE. .........GREG♥

I liked it.

I like SS06's writings. I'm always looking for his newest. They are fun, insightful and as writing, they flow. BUT...to figure out how to create a story that ends with that last line full of puns, well that takes imagination as well as skill. 2nd time around and it is still so very funny.

Thanks SS06.

Thanks for the story.

Laughing...a third child would have had been named Knows.

You had me chuckling at many lines in this one. The only thing I didn't care for were the punny names of the characters.... ;-) But hey, you're the boss, so if they work for you, go for it!

And BTW, I love happy endings. Thanks for a fun read!

Not bad... not bad at all...

-jaye-

Ai was cheating, she realized Wayne was onto her, Ace who was fucking her for years

came up with a plan. Yep, the whole obfuscation of reality, false trails, BOLD Lies. The best part? It worked! Wayne will now willingly raised Aces children while Ai continues to cuckold him.

Matt M. would be proud of this story!

You should publish your story at "science fiction" and not at " loving wives"!!

Must be a Trump supporter because he seems to thrive on "alternative facts."

Edith, Louise & Maude??You really snuck that one in for us old timers. Really nice plot-line--strange characters--and fantasy & fiction too. Great! says JustJ

I'm still laughing. Great job. It continues to bemuse me the number of commentators who don't know what fiction means. Isaac Asimov and Jules Verne must be puzzled.

Write on! For the sake of the trolls, I do know the difference between write and right.

That was a pretty elaborate cover for Aida's affair. I wonder how she pulled off the special effects.

... though, to be honest, if you take the scenario at face value, I'm actually more willing to believe the "deceased girlfriend comes back from the dead as a succubus" part than I am the "ostensibly-intelligent woman believes that kissing a guy in front of her husband and pretending to have an affair will make a troubled marriage stronger" aspect.

It is obvious that you believe in fairy tales like AssClown Obama being American born or Killery being a nice person or even Bernie really wants to give “His” money to the poor !!! Hahahahaha the story was an excellent work of fiction but to you Denny Cain... TRUMP “IS” YOUR PRESIDENT !!!

She wants him to sexually assault her while she sleeps

She is physically abusive

And after a life together of him REPEATEDLY telling her he wasnt into mind games she fakes an affair?

I'd dump her ass for the third one alone

can't get over a story this long for such a simple joke, gum dwapps. that is funny shit right there.😁

Very off the wall story for Stang. Had me wondering if he was on steroids.

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So much nonsense it is ridiculous.

Sorry too far out

Of all this author's stories I've read this is the first one I've given less than 4.5 stars. This was weird. At least it evened to somewhat reality in the end. 3*

Is in his stories my neighbor doesn't lie, if He says she wasn't cheating she wasn't cheating. Now trying to make someone jealous is a slippery slope, way to easy to go off of the rails. This was a Halloween Story tucked into the LW genre so lighten up, maybe lay off of the sugar for a day or two. Edith, Louise and Maude; the first two were a hoot but I always hated Maude on both shows. Now, Betty White... Only one pony and no Jeeps? I enjoyed the hell out of the change of pace, did have to take a few minutes to clean the spray of Squirt off of the keyboard at the end before I could type this. Totally did not see this one coming, Gum Dwapps, indeed. Signed: BTW

Really ? I don’t know whether to laugh or cry. Your writing is great, there are virtually no grammatical or spelling mistakes but the storyline is just so bad it’s hilarious.

I realize that you must run out of new twists eventually but ghosts and ghouls ?

The name changing puns were mildly amusing to begin with but are now so corny it’s embarrassing.

Still worth reading and I do enjoy a happy ending.

You touched so many different areas of this story that it could be placed all over the listed areas. The story was so different that I really couldn’t put it down after I started reading it. I really was impressed. A Five Plus. Thanks for sharing.

I am reminded that the only difference between a good pun and a bad pun is that someone else thought up the bad one. That ending to one of ss06's very best is the sickest, worst pun ever! Just wish I had .....

Thanks,

detroitdave

Rather humorous. Of course the two hottest girls went for the RICHEST nice guy in school!!!

Strange but good story.

If he was such a nice guy,he would have dumped Maria for the way she treated Edith.

Very good read. Enjoyed it a lot. Thanks

Very good story. Thank-you!

Great stuff...

5* just for the stupid names. Hahaha, didn't twig until the very end.

Evah_Rheddy

Wonderful story! Now all you gotta do is switch to Challenger Hellcats

Today I read?, this andNOW I know I am not the one confused, the writer?, IS.

18yo HS graduates don’t get to attend officer training

Evie Dwapps

5* A great read. Your stories are wonderful to read. Love, laughter, mystery.... I thoroughly enjoy them!

A second boy would have too be Elmer Fudd. That's All Folks!

Absolutely fantastic.

Excellent!

Groannn!!!! Good one.

A long, tedious way to go for a ghost/succubus story that ends pathetically.

Basic story good but not my cup of tea

Spectacular. Good as any Stephen King tale. With extended conflicts and entanglements could easily be novel length.

4 Stars on a Great Story and I loved the ending ,

Great story. Very creative. Well written.

If he was such a nice guy,why did he let Maria treat Edith and others like she did?.

Nice touch with the names.

Fun story to follow. Happy Wayne and Aida end up together at the end. Enjoyed all the "Dwapps" names. My kind of humor. :-)

Nice plot twist. Author is talented and prolific.

Shades of Stephen King. A haunted Halloween 🎃.

Great story. Fun twists. ...thanks for minimal Mustang adulation.

Amazing story. Thankfully Aida is damn smart and observant, not to mention relentless.

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Excellente!

Great twist! Great names!

11/10!!!!!

An overly long and sad story about a man who was owned by two different women and loved by none.

Gum Dwapps 😂

Always thought this should end with “…and this Halloween we got an unexpected Mike Dwapps” and he rides off in the sunset on his trusted stead. Miss you SS06, there are a couple new GT’s that would like a mention in a new story ;)

Great and creative story. Thankfully Aida was not only a true loving wife but resilient and persistent to save her man. And to the many commenters below who think she cheated: you are idiots. It was staged to get him to shake him up. It is so obvious. Just read the story. Stop inventing your plot and injecting it into the author's. Well written. One of the author's best. Not his usual plot recipe.

Could have been worse, it could have been Dew Dwapps, LMAO. Not sure how we got the supernatural thrown into a Loving Wives story, but it was entertaining enough that I liked it.

5⭐s.

SCREENPLAY!

Can't believe that I missed the name puns until that last line lol. Good story and it fitted perfectly in the LW category. BardnotBard

Great story. Aida is an amazing woman. A true loving wife who rescued her husband from the supernatural but also healed his soul. She's a keeper. The commenters who rant about her, obviously never read the actual story. 5 blazing stars!

Great story. Love all the Dwapps!

A great read. Aida rocks!

Well that one never let's the reader know where it's going. Just gotta keep reading until it gets there. And Gum Dwapps? Good thing it was Halloween. Have some gum dwapps, kiddies. Lol. Gotta give it a 5. I don't want Maria (or anybody else) haunting me.

Aida doesn't deserve the Mc, like for real he couldn't move on from his High school sweetheart. He's the one who cheated, say if the bitch ghost succeeded in possessing Aida he literally killed her. He knew the ghost plan all along and went with it. He thought he was fucking the ghost so he literally cheated and if the possession was successful, then he would have killed his wife in cold blood. And Aida just literally forgave him. Fuck she should just move on, as the author portrays Aida to be beautiful she wouldn't have trouble finding someone and start a family, in most of this LW stories we hate the wife but the author here makes me hate the mc, Aida doesn't deserve him. She should have let the ghost take him away. I wonder how the mc would feel if the situation was reversed.

It was a 4 until the names of the kids came up so a 5 from me. Loved this story.

Wow. Aida is an ACTUAL loving wife. Amazing. I know some people don't care for it, but I liked the supernatural elements of this story. I mean, frankly, a dead girlfriend coming back as a succubus to possess your wife isn't really any more crazy than some of the supposed "real life" stories in this section.

This was a great story and I give it 5 stars. I enjoyed the Maria spirit part of the story and that stuff is not usually my cup of tea. But Wayne needed to make up his mind between Maria and Aida and in the end he finally made up his mind. Great story.

What a strange story. Not muck into the supernatural.