All Comments on 'Be My Valentine'

Love when brother dominates sister. Best with breeding. Though wish it was longer and expanded on. But fun quick romp for your first posting.

This was a great story and could go in several directions. Would love to read more of these characters. Thanks

Hope he gets sister again and maybe mom.

Good start

Really nice start. I agree, this could go in many different directions. Will be looking forward to reading more. Thank you for letting us share in your thoughts.

5 Stars! This could be very fun!

Too easy.

Can’t wait for more with little sister to help bring mom into submission for brother and for him to breed her too before he tries to figure out what’s going on with big sis!

Looking forward to Mom joining in and then big sis!

More please. He definitely should bang Heather, but while he's balls deep, Rose should teach her to eat pussy like a good fucktoy should. 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham

Like watching a drag race go for only a 16th of a mile… no build up, no character development, no conclusion, not even a surprised bitchy sister gaping at them as he carried little sis out of the bathroom. What a waste of a good concept.

Loved this story. Everyone wants the mom involved too but lets not forget about the stuck up older sister as well.

More please, this bloke is so lucky to have women like this around him.

Wow can you tell a man wrote this

Meh...

Even if she's begging for it, the rough sex ruins the romance. 3/5

Not very good at all. Unrealistic in so many ways.

Dumb