All Comments on 'Beach Bungalow'

Excellent story. Very charming, sexy, and romantic. You brought life to your characters. As it was I felt sorry for Laura. It seemed she was keeping something a secret. 5stars

Fun read.

Very nice story. 5⭐

I had a nice time.

I almost didn't when I saw the tag "big cock" having a preconception about a type of LW story (alpha male/slut/cheating/....)

In the end, this tag has no meaning or interest in the story, and it would have been a shame to miss a very good read.

Little sugary of an ending, but I loved the steady flow of the story arc. 5*

As always, love your work Kiki! These characters were fun to get to know, and a nice diversion from a lot of negativity lately. Thank you for sharing with us!

Rnebular

Good story, but loosen up on the dialogue tags. It’s fine to default to a simple “x said.” It gets really unwieldy when you constantly add adverbs.

Great story, I have a feeling Laura is also pregnant. Maybe a story for another time. 5 stars

Excellent and sweet story of friendship and love…but really there is little difference between the two.

I can only guess Laura is pregnant too and the girls know it. Hence the hug after turning down a drink before announcing she was moving away where she would be out of sight.

Well written with great character insight. Drew was a bit too introverted for my tastes and Kurt was an over the tops character but it worked in the end. I am assuming Drew also knocked up Laura, which probably was her intention, but will help to make the next chapter very interesting. Seems like you were hinting Miranda was instigating it, which will be a great twist to the next chapter as well. Thanks for this! 5/5

⭐⭐ Yeah, sorry, but this story went to shit when Drew and Miranda got engaged. What man wants to sit around with some of his best friends and share war stories about how they also fucked his wife. "The grin from Reggie was all the admission Drew needed."...and some of the other comments about Reggie and Miranda fucking towards the end of the story really killed it for me. Just sayin'.

One of my favorites. Nice and smooth.

Cheeky bitches........

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

I hate how a big baby like kurt is even taken serious in this story.