All Comments on 'Beach House Clean Up'

Well this was fun

I was very disappointed in the ending! I would guess that part really happened.

Wonderful, a spin off story perhaps soon...

That was a vivid tale. Normally, I can't stay engaged to a 4 page story. Rare is the teller able to hold my attention for that long. It appeals to my exhibitionist feelings.

When in Rome, etc.

Enjoyable read. And the epilogue was predictable, and normal course of events .

My personal druthers is for stories not to have drug use as a method for moving the story forward. The bit about Jess dumping the cocaine was gratuitous. Being the accomplished dancer, she would have stayed away and would have discarded it as a matter of fact. The inclusion of Kim and Milt was more than enough to add to the excitement of the sexual energies.

I do look forward to more stories.