All Comments on 'Beachcombing in Greece'

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SLC-OhioSLC-Ohioover 18 years ago
Syntax is terrible

Was this the writer's fault, or that of Lit? Lines are broken in mid sentence. It ruined what might have been a fun short story.

I often go on about these nude beach stories as being un realistic, and not representative of any nude beach that I have been to. But this tale does not have enough substance to justify a lengthy comment.

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