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by mrfallenangelxx

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Petef52Petef52about 9 years ago
Good descriptions

Needs a bit of editing to remove the typos and spelling errors....otherwise a good read...

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66about 9 years ago
Very romantic

A lovely story of a growing romance. As stated needs a bit of editing but was a lovely story I hope there is more to this as I would love to see these two develop more

HornyKipHornyKipover 2 years ago

So poorly written... I couldn't get very far before I had to stop. Don't bother to write anymore until you get some writing lessons and learn grammar and punctuation.

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