All Comments on 'Bears'

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JBEdwardsJBEdwardsabout 6 years ago
The last line

It's good to have perspective, isn't it? The last line of your story makes the whole read, short as it was, worthwhile!

GeneMajorsGeneMajorsabout 6 years ago
Really? A bear caused all that?

I almost wondered during the last paragraph that our (twitty) heroine didn't wander down the path and discover a bear costume suit on the trail where nature boy left it as he hurried off.

joelafayettejoelafayetteabout 6 years ago
good

made me feel young again with all the references to my favorite cartoon mice.

prinnaveaprinnaveaabout 6 years ago
Bear naked truth?

rolling on the floor laughing I loved it!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Would’ve been especially funny if the “bear” turned out to be one of Rob’s helpful buddies setting the trap whilst donning a realistic bear suit! 😂

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