All Comments on 'Beastly Roommates'

Loved it, more, please!

I see you threw in a cameo appearance from the stories "The serpent and the shoemaker" and "Death stalker".

Did not expect it to be as good as it was ... being non-human animal mix. It really was a very good love story. And yes ... you should continue!

Yes, Serafina, Van, Kenneth, and Chandra are references to Perentie's excellent stories. I did get Perentie's permission to put them in before writing the story, I just forgot to give him credit for the characters. I'll make sure to do that in part two.

Uhh. Wow. I didn’t expect the story to be as good as it was but omg. The amount of bad stuff I read before today made this story very surprising to me. I loved how you wrote it to be long which made it so that characters could be fleshed out and heck, mostly every single character feels real and have actual depth thanks to 11 pages, the relationship between Ruth and David feels real, it felt natural, the progression from roommates to friends to mates felt natural and never forced at all, the settings are told and explained in such great detail as well, just omg. Please if you can make a part 2! I know you wanna continue to expand and tell the relationship and characters. And if so, please do! Your writing is really really good for a ameture! I really hope that you continue to make great stories and get better at this, because man I had so much fun while reading this.

Ps. I liked the refrence to real life games and movies, it just makes it feel so much more real. Espically the varied but cool FF9 references. Being my favorite game and all, nice surprise :33

More - how did their family take the News?

Solid story! Great characters, pacing was on point. I honestly can’t think of any real criticism to give you, not even anything nitpicky.

Great job. I’ll keep my eye out for more from you

More - would like to see how their story ends!

I absolutely loved this story; the characters feel like real people and were so cute together <3

Would definitely like a part2, maybe answer if there's any possibility of children and some oral scenes

A great story with a great ending.

Didn’t see any mistakes or I read way too fast to see any grammar errors.

Regardless, any thoughts of a part 2? Humans compatible with monster-folk?

Keep it up!

Yes to part two. Would love the reaction of the parents. Hopefully all accepting! Plus them maybe even meeting the other different species couples. Good job so far

Very Fun, Kawaii und Romantique...Mas Plz!

11/10 Strawberry Daiquiris!!!!!

I agree part two is most definitely needed. I loved every second of this story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Damn this was so fucking good it would almost be a crime to end it here. Yes for a part 2! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I thought I recognized a girtablilu named Chandra! I didn’t think Perentie was around anymore; they haven’t posted anything since 2012.

This story was very well written and engaging. Definitely five stars.

This was a awesome love story, the main characters are adorable in their shyness. 😁

And yes, I noticed some spelling and punctuation errors, but they seemed minimal and didn't pull me out of the story.

Can't wait to read the next part!

This really brightened my day. Thankyou so much.

So cute. Lovely story.

Just found this and I'm flabbergasted how well written it is! Love the character building and slow romance. The slow burn is lovely.