All Comments on 'Beaten and Banged'

by Kyra_Dell

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Anonymousalmost 8 years ago

That is literally my perfect fantasy. Loved it!

biggreenfrog almost 8 years ago

Sensational !

Anonymousalmost 8 years ago

I love how you really built up the sexual tension instead of diving right into it. Plus his love for nonconsent and her uneasiness made this a nice non consent story. Please write a sequel! Your writing is amazing.

Anonymousalmost 8 years ago

Phenomenal

Very well done!

Anonymousalmost 8 years ago

looking 4 nauthy times

horny would love to play with u yummy 1 hornyman@ g,m,co

Anonymousalmost 8 years ago

Loved it

That was a perfect fantasy for me!

dev_pafr almost 8 years ago

nice

would love a sequel!

midwestlizzie almost 7 years ago

Bravo!

That was well written!!! Great build up, and awesome story line. Translated well for me in the States, no problems with anything. And the hot factor... whoa, definitely got my happy ending! Continue in writing. Doesn't need to be a sequel, but don't give up.

Shadowcatcher about 4 years ago

Nice, except for one word

“Congealed” I don’t really think she thickened upon cooling, like bacon grease in a pan. Great anticipation otherwise.