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by pacifist91w

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kulvienkulvienalmost 10 years ago

I enjoyed it but the ending just kind of sprang up out of no where. It was surprising to me because of all the build up in the beginning of the story. I exspected a consistent flow throughout. That is the only thing I can nit pick though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Nicely done

Your work conveyed a positive aura that flowed through the sexual scenes. I enjoyed it a lot. Thank you.

wonderer4wonderer4almost 10 years ago
5 stars!!!

A captivating story !

gnome_mangnome_manalmost 10 years ago
Excellent, as always

Such a lovely story. Knowing that he would move on, Janice was very brave.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

remarkable

well written , engaging & interesting tale, dealing with some very dificult topics

xxxhugsxxx

5 star.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

WTF did I just waste 10 minutes skimming through ? .... Wrong site ya fat fuck

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I read and write romantic stories, complete with character and relationship development. A high percentage of my work is lesbian fiction. (That said, I have tried or will try writing almost anything!) It's rare, but I also do a bit of editing and proofreading. I love gettin...